Monday, February 1, 2010

another in-process poem, structured

stanza
(something profound; for it is so maddenlingly difficult to procure any sort of original thought processes about love; love itself being so terribly idiomatic)

------> stanza: allusions? nothing mythological. Biblical? literary. fallback=plath

stanza: end in couplet?

(what is so terribly ironic, matt foreman, is that the last "poem, structured" was for you in the sense that you wanted to see how the process was structured: how alarmingly we have developed, that this is for you in the sense that I love you, I do.)

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A thousand barren earths beseech, "love
Neither quite so quickly nor so well."

1 comment:

Unknown said...

words are beautiful.